Please destroy my cover letter

Back story: year out of undergrad, trying to land any finance role at this point. Thanks!

"My name is and I am currently employed by Company as an Operations Specialist. I was recently introduced to your firm via source and was intrigued with what I learned of [Company specific info]. I am interested in pursuing an entry-level financial position at your firm and have enclosed my resume and background information below.

I am a graduate of the College, with a Bachelor’s in finance. While in college, I was employed as an Office Associate by Company. I also completed a summer internship with a Morgan Stanley private wealth management group in the Blank area. This internship led me to pursue a major in finance. Through these experiences, I’ve had the opportunities to develop necessary skills, such as teamwork, problem-solving, and communication.

Given my background and experience, I believe I am a good candidate for the [Position Name] position within your firm. I believe the responsibilities given to this position can serve as a great learning experience, and I look forward to joining and contributing to your firm.

I would welcome an opportunity to discuss my qualifications with you and learn more about [Firm Name] at your earliest convenience. I can be reached # or via email at . Thank you very much for your time and consideration."