Resume for FT BB S&T recruiting (revised) + Cover Letter
Hi guys, Posted here before and got some really helpful reviews from everyone, thank you. Made quite a bit of changes to my resume (since my internship wasnt over when I last posted), and would be great if you guys could review. Also posting my cover letter here, would be great if anyone can comment on it.
Changes to resume: - Tried to add some results/quantify but probably still not good enough? - Took out the dirac nature of delta thing (sounds really geeky) and replaced with another project I worked on - Changed some of the wordings to hope to make it flow better and easier to read
Question: Are my three-line bullet points too long?
Revised resume here: http://www.razume.com/documents/16666
Cover letter here http://www.razume.com/documents/16667
Old resume here: http://www.razume.com/documents/16211
Looks good to me, kind of dense, but maybe that's a good thing.
Your resume looks excellent but your cover letter could use some work. In your first paragraph you should use more action words and words that show that you are a senior at a top university: instead of saying you learned, you can say it came to my attention. Also, try to provide some information about the bank that you are applying to in the first paragraph. Write about one of their recent acquisitions, profits and/or strategies.
GPA isn't great but with those internships i'm very sure you'll get something this year
I also think your CV looks quite impressive. Try to integrate what eokpar02 says about your cover letter. Good luck !
Why the gap in 2008?
did something irrelevant, that was freshman summer anyway
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