Resume Review - Employer to sponsor work visa

Hello,

Can someone please review my resume? http://www.razume.com/documents/18396 I would really appreciate it. Since i don't have much quality work experiance and i will need the employer to sponsor my work Visa, i am open to jobs in corporate finance, non profit organizations and unpaid internships. I just need once chance to prove my worth. Please let me know what you think about it. Thank you

Sincerely, Ashini

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Best Response
  1. Lose the employment for catering department (do you have any more relevant clubs to put, if not just don't put anything)
  2. Second bullet point under Plasto Packing loses me a little at the end, maybe you are missing an "and"
  3. Third bullet point under Plasto has a grammatical error
  4. First bullet point under First Investors is worded poorly
  5. Under Rotaract Club be more specific, what kinds of speakers
  6. Lose proficient in Word, Excel and Powerpoint
  7. Wouldn't hurt to throw in a few interests to "humanize" your resume

Needs some examples, like "gained financial knowledge such as...xx analysis..."

 
rebelcross
ashinishahThank you so much! I have revised my resume. http://www.razume.com/documents/18400 Few interests for the kind of jobs i am looking for or generally? I am confused... please let me know if i need to make more changes. Thanks

When thanking somebody, a silver banana goes a long way.

I am sorry i am new on this website. Can you please elaborate? I am not very familiar with silver bananas. Would would recommend any more changes?

 

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