Resume Review - Help with Resume from UCLA

Hey guys, if anyone can critique my resume, it would be greatly appreciated. Ive been playing around with the format and wording for a little wile.

http://www.razume.com/documents/15727

Theres the link.

Thanks

 
Best Response

Sorry if it seems like I'm trolling your threads, the comment on the other one was obviously a joke.

Advice:

-This one is important. For your coursework, list the actual course name rather than the the number. The vast majority of the people that look at your resume will NOT be UCLA alumni, so they'll have no idea what Econ 41 or Calculus 31B is (and there's NO way in hell they're looking it up). Instead, say that you took Microeconomics, Macroeconomics, Calculus, Financial Accounting, Managerial Accounting, etc. Don't worry about space, you're still a n00b and have plenty of it.

-List your Work & Leadership Experience in reverse chronological order. If you would like to split your student group experience from your work experience then make a separate header.

-Your Factory Floor Assistant job says you started in June of 209, suggesting you worked there for over 1,800 years.

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Haha thanks,

I was figuring you were just another Bay-area based hater. Ill fix those up quick. Any other advice on how I should get into the IB recruiting scene?

Thanks again

 

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