http://razume.com/documents/8014
Please review my resume. I will be applying to BBs for a FT job in the fall and am wondering what my chances are. 2 notes:
1) Winter 2008 is misalligned because of razume
2) The bullet points for my JPM internship are projected, obviously they will be better once I actually start working.
Thanks in advance!
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It's tough to guess which of ASU/FSU/Auburn/Iowa/Oregon is located in Tallahassee, FL ;)
Sorry I can't give you feedback now, not enough time, but I enjoyed that
Maybe I attend the the university of Oregon's branch in Tally...
jk, i just realized that I left the email address too, o well, first time doing this...
P.S.: if I were you, I'd use one of paid professional resume-check services. You have great internships to talk about, but the descriptions aren't that informative. $200 now might be a difference between getting 1st round interviews from 6 BB/elite rather than 3.
alignment: some of your titles are aligned over the bullets, while some are in a little rather than over the bullets.
as puss said, formatting shouldn't have been a problem on razume if you saved as pdf
community service: why is Local capitalized in one place and not in another (unless they're placeholders). I don't think you complete service "from," I'd change that word
I'd expand on the 1M investment pool, that's a fairly substantive amount for an undergrad to be managing
As Puss said, you should redo your degree title. I'd go with: B.S. Accounting and Finance, Cum Laude, Phi Kappa Phi (ditch the semicolons)
Interests could also be brushed up on. Meeting new people? I'm not sure that goes on a resume unless you want a role in HR
Ill change the interests section and some of the formatting issues.
Puss- What is wrong with my bullet points, I feel like they sufficiently describe what I did. How do you think they should look.
Also, should some of my bullet points go over 1 line, it saves me space if I cram it all into one line?
Drexel- Where should I put the Student Investment Fund? Under Work Experience, or should I put it up top with Education?
Thanks for the input. If anyone has any more suggestions please let me know.
Finally, what do you guys think my chances are of getting FT interviews? the JPM MO role was my only interview and I am hoping FT recruitment goes better for me
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