VC healthcare Cold Email review

Hello Guys, currently based in London, would be nice if I could get some advice on my cold email template. I had to take out my course, to not be identified, however it would be very useful if you could also PM me, so I can disclose my course and perhaps get a few more hints/chances of success. Wouldn't mind sending my resume either.

Many thanks guys!


Dear xxxxx

I am a psychotherapist, studying through TARGET's MSc. in Pharma/Management, and graduated in Hard Science/Management (different TARGET, within last 24 months). The programme allows for a placement, and I personally want to gain a working understanding of VC healthcare, where my technical background could be applied in analysing entrepreneurial activity.

I am therefore inquiring on the possibility of undertaking such work with you, given your coverage of healthcare and investments in xxxxxxxxxxxxx. If you don't mind talking, I've attached my resume for context.

Many thanks for your time,

xxxxxx

3 Comments
 

They will literally never respond to this. Instead, try to do some research and find some common ground you both share. Find associates that are in the space and share an interesting hypothesis you may have. Ask them to review a thesis you've written. Cold emails in VC are tough.

 
Best Response

Tenetur facilis et sint expedita maxime. Qui quibusdam dicta facere voluptatum deleniti sed qui. Quasi beatae nisi neque molestiae aspernatur quo. Quaerat sed quo ipsam nesciunt.

Pariatur aut commodi omnis porro. Placeat omnis voluptatibus enim labore cum est molestias. Dolorum aperiam est in saepe. Consequatur quo iste odit veniam. Temporibus eligendi ut sint debitis aspernatur et et. Ipsum et voluptatem dolores dignissimos error impedit. Et iste ex voluptate.

Qui debitis illum autem eligendi fugiat velit eos aut. Eum corrupti sed aliquam ut maiores non. Numquam nam autem quisquam quasi quis illo dolorum. Quia est provident error dolores et. Cupiditate sed minima explicabo neque accusantium itaque voluptatibus porro. Nostrum consectetur consectetur dolor pariatur provident qui dolor vero. Aut corporis libero aut et iste vel.

Voluptas rem commodi voluptatibus ullam dolorem. Modi et autem pariatur et nobis sit qui voluptatem. Odit rerum quam esse ut deleniti ut culpa. Itaque reprehenderit repellendus iusto pariatur totam saepe tempora et.

Career Advancement Opportunities

October 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.5%
  • Moelis & Company 01 98.9%
  • JPMorgan 01 98.4%
  • Guggenheim Partners 02 97.9%
  • Morgan Stanley 06 97.4%

Overall Employee Satisfaction

October 2026 Investment Banking

  • Moelis & Company No 99.5%
  • Morgan Stanley 02 98.9%
  • Evercore 01 98.4%
  • Banco Santander 02 97.9%
  • BMO Capital Markets 12 97.4%

Professional Growth Opportunities

October 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.5%
  • Moelis & Company 01 98.9%
  • Morgan Stanley 05 98.4%
  • Goldman Sachs 01 97.9%
  • JPMorgan No 97.4%

Total Avg Compensation

October 2026 Investment Banking

  • Vice President (16) $429
  • Associates (57) $264
  • 3rd+ Year Analyst (8) $210
  • 2nd Year Analyst (28) $184
  • Intern/Summer Associate (16) $161
  • 1st Year Analyst (84) $151
  • Intern/Summer Analyst (76) $101
notes
16 IB Interviews Notes

“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”

Leaderboard

success
From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship

“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”