Critique a Rising Sophomore's Resume
Hey all,
I'm a rising sophomore at a non-target hoping to score an IB internship during winter/spring and summer. Looking for any resume critique and suggestions, don't hold back-- thanks.
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At first glance, definitely want to take off "The Office" (kinda funny you italicized it) and hip hop/rap. I also notice you occasionally change tenses - definitely want to keep it all the same tense, especially this: Worked with CEO to pitch new pricing structures that encouraged recurring revenue based on scenario analysis and identification of pricing inconsistencies from 5,000+ past client transactions." It's sort of confusing - probably change it to"identified pricing inconsistencies" but the entire sentence doesn't make much sense to me. Then again, I just took a look during this break I have at my internship so
Thanks, I will fix the tenses.
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