Grammar check on M&A description, please.

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Do the phrases (used for a title of an article) below make sense?
- Sale of [target company name] to [acquirer] through tender offer
- Tender of the shares by [name of a major shareholder selling the shares in the tender offer]

Thank you for your help.

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Jun 1, 2018