Which 150 max words motivation statement for Man Group is better?

Statement 1 I would like to take part in this Insight Week because I am highly interested in the Investment Management industry and would like to gain an insight into the diverse, inclusive and meritocratic environment that Man Group prides itself on. Investment Management interests me because I want to help families earn a return on their hard-earned savings and so achieve financial security. I’ve seen first-hand the detriment poor financial management can cause on a family. I want to be able to help others realise their investments so that less families would suffer because of poor financial planning.
Because your firm promotes original thinking, responsibility and excellent performance, I am excited about the prospect of learning about the different ways Man Group invest, networking with Man Group employees and having my own portfolio reviewed. I would also find it interesting to learn how Bloomberg and Goldman Sachs collaborate with the firm.

statement 2 **My interest in taking part in Man Group's Insight Week stems from my goal of working in the Investment Management industry; this program would enable me gain an insight into the dynamic world of investing. A career in Investment Management aligns with my desire to help others achieve financial security by increasing returns on their hard-earned savings. Ineffective money management continues to be a weakness for many individuals and often leads to devastating consequences for themselves and their loved ones. As a result, I am passionate about helping others achieve financial independence and enabling them to reach their goals. I am eager to gain insight into the diverse, inclusive, and meritocratic environment Man Group prides itself upon. I hope to learn about the different ways Man Group invests, what differentiates Man Group as a fund manager, and further refine my own investment skills. **