Graduate recruiting resume roast - HF/PE experience
Would anyone be willing to take a look and give advice on my bullet points? I'm a non-target but have worked very hard to get these work experiences and need as much help as I can. Any advice is much appreciated.

Based on the most helpful WSO content, here are some key points to consider when refining your resume for graduate recruiting, especially with HF/PE experience:
Resume Review:
Bullet Points:
Skills Section:
Networking:
Headhunter Outreach:
Profile Setup:
Feedback Integration:
By following these guidelines, you can enhance your resume and increase your chances of success in the competitive HF/PE recruiting process.
Sources: A Non-Target's Perspective - My MM PE Recruiting Process, Non-Target Recruiting Guide Part I: Resume and Networking, Non-Target Recruiting Guide Part I: Resume and Networking, A Non-Target's Perspective - My MM PE Recruiting Process, Non-Target with Great Experience and 4.0 GPA - How do I get people to talk to me when Networking or turn HR's head when I apply?
the curvy font is kinda distracting/takes a second glance to read, might want to change it to a italicised version of a simpler font
overall not bad
- change font to times NR or calibri
- i get a lot of undergrad resumes and everyone likes to say they know 3-4 valuation methods. you wrote it twice on the resume - i'd delete both. no one really cares that you know how to spread comps haha
- in the bullet points, tell me more about the deal / types of bespoke analyses you did, as opposed to model outputs / technical analyses (ie scenario analysis). I expect that you already know the technical skills and can build a model - tell me the unique things you did / try to impress me
- remove modeling and analyses in add'l information
- add more interests with the new space (no longer need such a big indent once you remove the modeling analyses line)
- what is minitab?
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