2021 SA Applicant Please rip my Resume to shreds
I'm in the process of applying for IB SA 2021 in Toronto please rip my resume to shreds
Trending Content - Investment Banking Forum
Career Resources
WSO Free Modeling Series - Now Open Through
July 31, 2026
9 Free Financial Modeling Lessons
Get instant access to lessons taught by experienced private equity pros and bulge bracket investment bankers including financial statement modeling, DCF, M&A, LBO, Comps and Excel Modeling.
+Bonus: Get 27 financial modeling templates in swipe file
+Bonus: Get 27 financial modeling templates in swipe file
High Finance Applications
Guaranteed
Get at least one offer GUARANTEED
- 1:1 support
- 92% success rate
- 2,000+ mentor network
- Unlimited Live bootcamps
- AI for resume + LinkedIn
- Networking automation tools
- HireVue simulation tool
- Full course library
- Private Slack community
- 20hrs of mocks
- + much more...
how about changing your dates to more specific ones? for example Jun. 2019 – Aug. 2019, Jan. 2020 – Present, etc.? that's usually more common on résumés, unless you did that here just for more anonymity.
Sounds good, will update any other feedback?
2nd bullet under extracurricular activities seems to be unfinished.
Would recommend adding more to your interests section. IMHO, that section has a lot of importance in a world where most applicants for IB are all super smart, ambitious people. At some point, all the resumes begin to look the same on the academic and work experience front but if you have a unique interest, or have an interest that a hiring manager has, you’re more likely to get an interview or even an offer
Eaque esse incidunt omnis atque. Animi laudantium quod qui sunt modi quos voluptatem in. Id qui officia quia cumque.
Est iusto libero inventore perferendis quod laudantium. Et mollitia odit veritatis doloribus tempore aut.
Saepe aliquid itaque aperiam atque. Amet ullam similique aspernatur ipsa saepe qui exercitationem.
See All Comments - 100% Free
WSO depends on everyone being able to pitch in when they know something. Unlock with your email and get bonus: 6 financial modeling lessons free ($199 value)
or Unlock with your social account...