Resume me review, Help before the NOV 25 Goldman Sachs Deadline
Gents,
Goldman Sachs Deadline for 2013 recruiting season for internships is on the 25th. I am a Mechanical Engineering major and have a very wide knowledge and experience on my field . I am applying for a technology analyst position, maybe even a quant since I basically solve non-linear homogenous equations, matricies, LaPlace Transforms, Derivatives, Partial Derivatives, Integrals etc .
I need a deep hard core review on this , this is my first ever resume going to Wall ST and dont know if its pleasing enough, I need your insight, Thanks .
http:// www razume com/documents/28584
I am sorry WSO wont allow me to post links so I removed the periods from the www and com .
I don't think it's on the 25th of november, but okay
ha this resume made me feel happy about mine
Then i saw the windows 98, this is a joke right?
You're joking, right? Windows 98 skills?
Go check out some other resumes in the resume forum and then redo your own completely. Then ask for advice again.
Formatting is terrible...you have a lot of wasted space with huge margins and yet you decide to go to two pages to impress them with Win98 skills???
Also, very green in terms of experience.
Solid.
Oh dear.
In addition to using M&I formatting....
Your work experience isn't very relevant. As I understand it, you're a valet. That's fine as a side-job, but you're highlighting as your primary qualification for getting a job at Goldman Sachs. Are you in any clubs that you could spin into "leadership experience"? Have you done any long-term projects?
Well in my field, yes, I did an efficient Queensboro bridge competition truss blue print drawing.
I apologize for the stupidity, I had no idea where to start building a resume, about the windows 98, a 55 year old told me to add it in there, I edited my entire resume based of M&I template, thank you, heres a review, give me your input, maybe better wording for something. Thank you
http://www razume com/documents/28615
Much better, but keep your resume to one (1) page! Also, don't get your hopes up, because you are not getting an internship at GS.
My serious advice would be for you to call up any and all UBS or Merrill Lynch BRANCH (NOT corporate office) near your school and offer to work for free as an internship. Realistically you have have a low GPA at a non-target, no finance experience, and the only relevant coursework you've taken is economics for engineers. You gotta start at the bottom and that is an unpaid private wealth management internship at one of those places i mentioned above.
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