Resume me review, Help before the NOV 25 Goldman Sachs Deadline

I am sorry WSO wont allow me to post links so I removed the periods from the www and com .

I don't think it's on the 25th of november, but okay

ha this resume made me feel happy about mine

Then i saw the windows 98, this is a joke right?

You're joking, right? Windows 98 skills?

Go check out some other resumes in the resume forum and then redo your own completely. Then ask for advice again.

Formatting is terrible...you have a lot of wasted space with huge margins and yet you decide to go to two pages to impress them with Win98 skills???

Also, very green in terms of experience.

Solid.

Oh dear.

In addition to using M&I formatting....

Your work experience isn't very relevant. As I understand it, you're a valet. That's fine as a side-job, but you're highlighting as your primary qualification for getting a job at Goldman Sachs. Are you in any clubs that you could spin into "leadership experience"? Have you done any long-term projects?

I apologize for the stupidity, I had no idea where to start building a resume, about the windows 98, a 55 year old told me to add it in there, I edited my entire resume based of M&I template, thank you, heres a review, give me your input, maybe better wording for something. Thank you

http://www razume com/documents/28615

Much better, but keep your resume to one (1) page! Also, don't get your hopes up, because you are not getting an internship at GS.

• Don't write "Economics for Eng" as relevant subject. Write some quant subject (ie. statistics, rocket science, etc. something that I am sure you have done);
• The Education bullets are not aligned like those in the work experience part;
• Languages should be something like: Fluent in English; Conversational proficiency in Arabic;
• There's a space before "lead team effort" that should not be there;
• Don't like the format of your Education section.