Tear up a rising freshman's resume?
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P.s. Where 'my company' and 'company branch' are I have the actual company names. I excluded them to maintain anonymity.
Don't bother looking for "Patrick Mastur" in Google. It's not his...name.
Just a heads-up for you, it's not Kendrick Lamar either
Haha, nice.
On a real note...you are way ahead of the game. Just network and keep your GPA up and you could probably get a soph ibd easily
Can I get some advice on my resume please
Quite good for just being a incoming freshman. Be careful of your fonts, and make sure you are consistent throughout (address is Arial, rest is Times New Roman).
You will eventually fill in some of the blank spaces such as honors, but if they remain blank, I'd take them out. I'm sure you have stuff from high school you can fill in as a placeholder for now.
Thanks!
I don't think IB is within the exit opps of being in the Music Industry, Kendrick.
In all seriousness, it's a pretty solid resume for a rising freshman. My suggestions would try to fix the formatting between your different jobs so there's not a white gap. Try going into some more detail with your bullet points to so you can fill up space and make your resume seem "fuller".
Thanks guys. Going to take your advice Stryfe thanks for that
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