+200 applications later, still NO offer.PLS, HELP. THX

1) Non-target London graduate
2) GPA 3.8
3) Graduated June 2021
4) Past experience as intern at regional spanish bank
5) Experienced as portfolio manager at a family office
6) Multilingual
7) +200 applications this summer
8) Only had 3 interviews
9) Applying both internship/graduate programs
10) Networked A LOT
11) Have 2 great referrals from VPs at JPM

  • Am I am doing anything wrong?
  • Advice more than welcome.

Many thanks!

 
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With 200 apps and lots of networking, you should be getting more than 3 interviews.

Possible reasons:

1. Something is wrong with your resume

2. While people tell you you should apply everywhere, make sure you’re meeting the very important criteria (right to work and languages. That is to say, if it’s a Russian fund in London covering Russian companies and Russian is a requirement, don’t apply unless you speak Russian)

3. Not applying to a variety of places (big, small, all throughout the uk)

4. Networking with the wrong people

Are you an eu citizen? What languages do you speak and at what level?

 

Thank you for your answer.

  • I am born and raised in Spain. I speak Spanish and Catalan.
  • I moved to the UK to study for my BSc in Finance.
  • I have the pre-settlement status, which means that I am permitted to live and work in the UK.
  • I focused my application process on big banks and BB, but I applied to small firms too. I would say that the proportion of BB/boutiques is 80/20%
 

FYI I think you name might be in the link.

Initial thoughts:

- There’s so much white space and the bullet points are weak.

-The dates look funny. Maybe it’s a European thing?

-The format structure is weird

- Interests are vague. What’s your favorite football team or league? What kind of reading do you enjoy? Scientific journals or curious George?

- please talk about what deal you worked on during your internship. Can be vague (500 million ipo for a consumer company)

- Some bullets end in periods, others don’t 

- Don’t say multilingual, just say English (C1), Spanish (native), Catalan (native) or whatever your level are

- For your column experience, say something along the lines of “- Published weekly articles on  metals and mining M&A deals, new law changes, and brexit” next bullet “Achieved most read column of the week” don’t have anything in bold

btw on phone so I keep editing

 

I posted a cut version without my name nor contact info to keep me anon.

You are right, the dates are in the European format.

I tried to follow the WSO CV structure adding my personal touch.

In addition to specifying my favorite sports teams and fav readings, what do you think I should add?

Thanks

 

Sorry to say, but the dates are not in a "European" format or whatever that means.

A couple of pointers:

Education section doesn't tell me much. Which courses did you take? What is CFA accredited?

  • Whenever you just use the years, you do "recent year-older year", but when you include the months, you say "Jun 2020 - Aug 2020", so you're being inconsistent.
  • You go to a UK school and are applying to UK jobs, but you use a GPA on a 4.0 scale on your resume. Did you convert this yourself? I'm not sure if that is the way to go.
  • I think you call a DCF a DFC in one of your bullet points.
  • I don't know how I feel about the sub-bullet points, makes it look sloppy imho.

Look, your profile seems strong enough to get more looks than you've gotten, but the resume looks like you haven't put much effort into it and that just reflects badly.

 

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