Cold Email Template Advice (summer internship)

Hey guys, I'm an incoming college freshman at a target school and am looking to land an internship over the summer. I'm mainly targeting search funds and I've created a cold email template. I was wondering if I could receive any comments/criticism on it. Thanks!

Hi Name,

My name is Name and I am an incoming freshman at [target school]. I found your contact information through (source) and noticed that your search fund (personalized statement). I am interested in a career in investment banking and am looking for ways to gain exposure to the field. 

I wanted to reach out to see if you have a few minutes to discuss your experiences at company and [specific to firm]. I understand that you are likely busy, and am more than happy to work around your schedule. I’ve attached my resume for your reference.

Best regards,

Name

Thanks again!

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