I wouldn't reply to an email like this because it looks like you need too much coaching. This is poor writing, adherence to a business formal format is recommended.
Run this through a gen-AI platform and ask it to correct your grammar.
You never know how your email will be perceived. Everything in parenthesis is unnecessary.
Remove the reference to "first-generation", it is fine to discuss but don't make it the focus of your personality in an introduction.
Try to mention something interesting about the recipient
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I wouldn't reply to an email like this because it looks like you need too much coaching. This is poor writing, adherence to a business formal format is recommended.
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