Resume Critique - Need help on bullet points

Hey everyone,

If you can check out my resume and let me know any comments/suggestions to make some of the bullet points flow better or sound more professional it would be appreciated. Thanks in advance

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July 2026 Investment Banking

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  • Moelis & Company 01 98.9%
  • JPMorgan 01 98.3%
  • Guggenheim Partners 01 97.7%
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July 2026 Investment Banking

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  • Evercore No 98.9%
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  • Moelis & Company 01 98.9%
  • Morgan Stanley 06 98.3%
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