What would you do given this resume?

"Invited to play golf in work related outings"

Why in Scooter McGavin's name is that one of your work exp bullet pts?

1. Work Experience should be above leadership experience. (Alternatively you could make this one section)
2. Remove "technical skills". Everyone knows how to use Microsoft products.
3. You just started as analyst for your school's undergrad portfolio in September. There shouldn't be more than 2-3 bullet points at most. Bullet points should be things you did.
4. All bullet points should be consistent and start with a verb. Analyzed, Conducted, Organized, etc
5. Bullet points should be consistent (ex: caddy job)
6. Combine caddy job with driving range attendant

You need to do a better job at selling your experiences.

Thank you deleted golf bullet point, switched around work and leadership , fixed verbs

is there anything i can do to add to this resume?

ive signed up for bloomberg aptitude test well take remaining bloomberg test should I take modeling courses?

thanks again guys