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Agree w/ your instinct that "exposed" is a really vague/fluffy verb. How exactly did you come into contact with those valuation methodologies? Did you prepare analyses using them? Clarify.

• not as vital, but some (search google/this forum) would say in resume proper form is not having periods after bullets/entries
• were you in specific groups in your work experiences? i.e. Finance Intern, Corporate Strategy Division

No I was not in any specific groups. I probably will omit the 2nd bullet because i didnt do anything besides learn about the valuation stuff.

i didnt read your second post....but yes i agree

Thanks bullbythehorns. I will omit.

• I would take out the Sep 2009 - Present on your education and just put your expected graduation date there instead
• Even if you weren't in a specific group put an industry/business description after your position title, eg Finance Intern - Long/Short Equity Hedge Fund
• Take out the relevant coursework section, those are all very basic courses and assumed for a finance major
• Remove the MS office stuff from your technical skills. As M&I says -- this isn't 1999.

Overall pretty good though.