Please give her a look!
http://www.razume.com/documents/22276
Please help come up with a better name for the last section. It currently reads "Additional Experience".
Looking for a BB SA positions.
EDIT: uploaded reformatted resume
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Try saving your resume as a PDF and then reupload so that formatting errors don't occur. (also useful when applying for real, since for some reasons word docs, just don't look consistent when you upload)
delete the "profile" section
professional exp before clubs
cut down on bullets for some of the exp's. no more than 4 i would say per exp.
delete the "references available upon request"
add interests
i would also delete periods at end of bullets
rest of resume is kinda hard to read
Great feedback. All other please chime in, need this ready by the AM.
EDIT Posted this before I saw the above post. Some overlap but also agree with everything else applelover said.
Here's some constructive criticism regarding the profile section: your resume IS your profile. No recruiter is going to care what you have to say about yourself. They do care about what's on your resume and how you present it. As far as profile, "summary of skills" sections go, they are extremely redundant and a waste of space.
Everybody above me has posted sound advice. However the one thing they missed which stands out like a sore thumb on your resume is formatting.
I don't know if it's razume but your spacing should be CONSISTENT. If you have a space after your university experience (which you should) you should have a space after every other experience.
Use real dashes. You have them in your professional experience section but do not employ them in your clubs/activities portion.
For your job title, I would just say Research Intern. Unless your title is specifically THAT.
Try to fit your timelines on one line. It looks ugly having them on different lines. Abbreviations would help here.
Also, for your graduation date, Expected is fine. I would write March 2013 (Expected) vs what you have down.
Your resume lacks polish and is ugly as a consequence. I'd recommend you spend some time getting the formatting down if you want it as perfect as possible
-Remove the "Profile" Section. The whole point of the resume is to make such descriptions irrelevant
-Round GPA to "3.7/4.0" (But thank you for maintaining sig-figs in the denominator, very few people do this and it drives me crazy)
-No point in saying "Expected Graduation", just write "March 2013 and they'll know what you mean
-The note about references at the bottom is irrelevant, remove it. They know that when they ask you to jum, you'll ask how high; they'll be able to get references out of whether you mention it or not
-Change "Additional Experience" to "Additional Qualifications"
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