my bullets are made out of ice

im writing my resume,

what do you think about these bullet points?
(specifically on the wording and grammar please)

• Oversee cash drawer ensuring that the amounts are correct and that there are adequate change for a speedy and convenient customer transaction

• Head logistics in absence of owners (25% of the time) arrange priorities and ensure that store policies and procedures are met

• Integrated/ managed a waitlist for students during busy hours which helped maintain order

• Proposed to my supervisor, items that requires replacement due to deterioration increasing students enjoyment

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Thank you sir, the bullets are actually for different jobs. Seems like the bullet points itself are fine.. or someones hiding something from me...

 

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