Please brutalize my resume

I really like how you expanded your interests into their own bullets and described what you've done in each.

That being said, you should always consider if that real estate is better off used somewhere else. If and when the time comes, don't be afraid to shorten it to a line.

Other than that, maybe quantify your results?

Thanks zenaku. I do think I need to quantify my results in the engineering experience. But whenever I try to, they become insignificant, not broad enough. Could you give me an example or so? Thanks.

a few items on the list are way outdated- the dance item @ 2007 is way too old for your resume and there really is no need to list your secondary and high school education unless they're specifically asked for.

just my 2 c worth..

Negotiating is in a different tense to the other points, is this intended? Also should partnership be partnerships?

Also for point 3 under the first job, I think you should consider starting with 'Discovered a costly calibration switching error', also does calibration switching need to be in speech marks?

Finally, when googling calibration-switching error, your linkedin popped up, you seem to have been pretty keen to keep yourself anonymous so just an FYI.

Thanks anon56, the mistakes are noted.

"Finally, when googling calibration-switching error, your linkedin popped up, you seem to have been pretty keen to keep yourself anonymous so just an FYI."

lol, I'm still trying to find the function that hides my linkedin from public. Social network privacy is such an oxymoron.

looking good!

I know it's very rare, but is there some other way to present that "self support" line? Kind of awkward but maybe because I've never seen that before.