Please Critique my Resume - Summer Internship

Dude immediately change your CV and delete your name... for god's sakes someone could use to steal credit card info, and many, many other things.

while you could try to get into TMT, you will most likely be recruited for IT

Dean's List with 3.5+? Looks low to me In my school Dean's List was for 3.9+

As someone with C-level small business experience, get ready to be GRILLED on it. People are going to think you're BSing to juice your resume. Prepare.

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Overall much better here are the quick re-its then maybe 1-2 more turns and you'll be good.

1. Again would separate between club and real work. It seems a bit confusing looks like the last 3 are more school oriented versus work oriented? Tough to tell.
2. All experience needs a minimum of two bullets so you can do that to add a total of at least 3 more lines.
3. Third bullet in second experience should be your first bullet. This SHOWS performance the best, a review that placed you at the top. I would call it "Ranked in top 10% in review process due to customer service/sales responses (however you were evaluated).
4. Skills and activities needs to be reformatted, you have colons then you go to bullets for the second one? Stick with the same format as the skills or you need to add a bullet and use a similar format to your work experience. It seems like you can extrapolate on what you do in the fraternity and maybe just kill the "welcome leader" since that sounds like you're just shaking hands with people.
5. Interests: Get rid of "shotgun sports" this is just a dangerous thing to put on the resume, can be misinterpreted easily. Same with mobile devices. Snowboarding is just fine. Try to think of maybe one more interest a good BS one is just "trading stocks" or something to that effect and just have a fake portfolio on yahoo.
6. Kill your classes that are not relevant... economics, and business writing are a waste.
7. Looks like your font sizes change? Relevant coursework looks to be a font size higher than the rest of the text?
8. Is the start up job done? Says Jan 2013?

Overall a significant improvement.

If you want to just ignore cut to the chase I would 1) sit down and think of more specific actionable bullets and 2) Separate school and real work experience still quite confusing when flipping through it.