Resume help please - Analytical role

what the hell is .odt format?

1. If it happened in the past use PAST tense. (Stockbroker / Stockbroker Intern)
2. Generate new business development opportunities through Customer Relationship Management (CRM) software -Has this lead to any new customers or increased efficiency?

You want to SHOW results.

Thanks for the tips. So the general format is ok? Am I too far graduated to put my GPA on there?

Place MS degree above your BA. If your MS degree GPA is better than your BA GPA put down that GPA only.

Also just realized your entire resume is your one experience at the Brokerage firm. Remove the intern part. Try to limit the number of bullet points.

All I read what stock broker!!! what about your interests (football, watch tv I don't know) you need to demostrate you are cool guy to be around???? do you speak any languages(other than english)??? do you know how to use Bloomberg, Factset, C++, STATA any special software????

You have a lot of unnecessary space (almost half of the page) taken up for education. You could easily reformat this to get your entire resumes down to one page.

i dont like your font, change it to to Cambria 10.5 - looks crisp doesnt it?

take off bank teller unless your applying to be a bank teller - insert some sort of leadership, skill, interest section or just anything that isn't stock broking