Tear my CV apart
Hey guys I just wanted to get a general CV check done to see where I can improve because there's definitely a lot of areas. Since I'm studying both Engineering and Finance and my degree requires Engineering work experience before I can graduate it'd be good to get general advice however, I do want to be working in finance after I graduate. At the moment I'm looking toward IB or Consulting. Cheers
Edit - second CV has been added in response to feedback
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not claiming to be an expert, but your resume shouldn't be more than one page for sure
This isn't necessarily a terrible resume, but it's truly not appropriate for today's industry and lacks detail. You should look at BB resume books or others posted online here to use as some sort of template.
Thanks for the feedback. I've made most of the changes you recommended and was wondering if I could get some revised feedback on this new copy
Absolutely!
Nice improvement from the first draft - good progress on format. Keep up the work.
-Remove associations, it looks silly -Indicate skill level in software -Too much engineering stuff, irrelevant -Remove high school education -Inconsistent date formatting
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