Very Concerned, Need Help Badly

-> I would put lines underneath Education/Experience/Leadership/I&A. Needs some type of separator for the eyes. -> Too much white space; decrease margins and spaces in between sections. Will give you more space to.. -> Quantify. There are no numbers in any of your job responsibilities. How many? How much? Can you quantify that value that you added? -> For first bullet point.. Needs more info. I have no idea what you actually did; very blanket statements. Sounds like it was an interesting experience -- expound upon it. -> For second bullet point.. Use numbers instead of words (e.g., "12" instead of twelve, "50" instead of fifty). Can you quantify how better the students did while you were a TA (e.g., average 1-2 letter grade improvement)? -> For third bullet point.. How many people did you do taxes for? Did you get any people who requested to be with you/any customer service awards? This is an awesome experience that you can beef up. -> For first leadership experience.. How many stocks did you pitch? What sector? Percentage change of members as a result of your recruitment efforts? Too qualitative, again. -> For second leadership experience.. Founded the club needs to be its own bullet point, too important. Competing at a national level needs to be expanded upon, as that is really cool. Need more detail on budgets (did you actively manage it? Give $$ numbers). -> For third leadership experience.. How many articles did you write? What subjects did you focus on? -> For Interests.. Be specific about Europe (Western/Eastern/both). If you have indie music/reading, make sure to be prepared with examples. Same goes for current affairs. I would try to put more specific interests, if you have any.

Hopefully that helps. Very rough but make sure to quantify and take care of all of that white space.