Please Critique My Cold Email Template

Hi monkeys,

I am cold emailing boutiques for a fall internship and wanted to ask for some feedback on my email template. Thanks!

Hello *Name*,

I am a second-year student at a non-target university double majoring in finance and economics. I am currently looking for internship opportunities available for the Fall of 2021. I realize you are busy but I would be grateful for an opportunity to discuss your work and/or firm. 

I have attached my resume for your reference.

Thank you, 

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