Resume critique for a junior looking to get into M&A

Hey guys, first time posting a thread here, learned a ton reading the forums for ~2 years…I'd appreciate if you could check out my resume to see what changes or improvements I could make. I'm planning to get my CPA and get into M&A banking after graduation. Thanks guys!

http://www.razume.com/documents/26380

18 Comments
 

How did you backpack in Eastern Europe for a year? Did you take a year off school? (I didn't look at anything else)

The answer to your question is 1) network 2) get involved 3) beef up your resume 4) repeat -happypantsmcgee WSO is not your personal search function.
 
bfinHow did you backpack in Eastern Europe for a year? Did you take a year off school? (I didn't look at anything else)

That's funny, you reminded me of a time years ago, when I was backpacking across western Europe. I was just outside Barcelona, hiking in the foothills of mount Tibidabo. I was at the end of this path, and I came to a clearing, and there was a lake, very secluded, and there were tall trees all around. It was dead silent. Gorgeous. And across the lake I saw, a beautiful woman, bathing herself. She was crying...

 
m56
bfinHow did you backpack in Eastern Europe for a year? Did you take a year off school? (I didn't look at anything else)

That's funny, you reminded me of a time years ago, when I was backpacking across western Europe. I was just outside Barcelona, hiking in the foothills of mount Tibidabo. I was at the end of this path, and I came to a clearing, and there was a lake, very secluded, and there were tall trees all around. It was dead silent. Gorgeous. And across the lake I saw, a beautiful woman, bathing herself. She was crying...

Not sure how this relates but alright.

The answer to your question is 1) network 2) get involved 3) beef up your resume 4) repeat -happypantsmcgee WSO is not your personal search function.
 

Move your education to the top, take your SAT off (it's not good enough), please change the font.

Why are you getting a CPA? It's not relevant to M&A.

MM IB -> Corporate Development -> Strategic Finance
 
Best Response

-Change from paragraph form to bullet form. The large paragraphs make it hard to read. -Chang to a "smaller" sans-serif font -Sentence structure consistency (e.g. "Built models including" not "Models built include" -Decrease the bullet margins in the FP&A section - the huge gaps look funny -"Performed independent contractor work FOR a venture-backed..." -Use a better action word than "took responsibility" -Cut down slightly on the detail, leaving only action and result - e.g. under the Modell's section the recruiter will get lost reading about glass and aluminum. Change to something like "Performed analysis using X method to make X project more cost effective, contributing to winning bid for $100 million"

As a CPA, I will say that the credential certainly doesn't hurt, but it is better suited to a Big 4 or corporate finance type of role. For your stated goals, there are probably better uses for your time and money (Series 7, etc.)

PM me if you want a second look after these changes.

 

Font kills. You doing 2 internships at the SAME TIME IN BOTH NYC AND NJ? ...trolling over 9000 bish.

[quote]The HBS guys have MAD SWAGGER. They frequently wear their class jackets to boston bars, strutting and acting like they own the joint. They just ooze success, confidence, swagger, basically attributes of alpha males.[/quote]
 

consider investing in professional advice... You're doing the right thing by asking around

the street with a river at one end and a graveyard at the other...
 
bfin
m56
bfinHow did you backpack in Eastern Europe for a year? Did you take a year off school? (I didn't look at anything else)

That's funny, you reminded me of a time years ago, when I was backpacking across western Europe. I was just outside Barcelona, hiking in the foothills of mount Tibidabo. I was at the end of this path, and I came to a clearing, and there was a lake, very secluded, and there were tall trees all around. It was dead silent. Gorgeous. And across the lake I saw, a beautiful woman, bathing herself. She was crying...

Not sure how this relates but alright.

It's a Friends reference:

Kruzon, that's pretty good! Aim for the Big 4; probably more opportunities than at a middle market.

 
m56
bfin
m56
bfinHow did you backpack in Eastern Europe for a year? Did you take a year off school? (I didn't look at anything else)

That's funny, you reminded me of a time years ago, when I was backpacking across western Europe. I was just outside Barcelona, hiking in the foothills of mount Tibidabo. I was at the end of this path, and I came to a clearing, and there was a lake, very secluded, and there were tall trees all around. It was dead silent. Gorgeous. And across the lake I saw, a beautiful woman, bathing herself. She was crying...

Not sure how this relates but alright.

It's a Friends reference:

Kruzon, that's pretty good! Aim for the Big 4; probably more opportunities than at a middle market.

Thanks for the tip...the event went pretty well. Set up 2 informationals this week actually. I had a PwC Manager look at my resume and other than some minor corrections & GPA, she gave nothing but positive feedback. Even gave me some tips for the interview as well. Got another informational with a Prudential auditor so I'll continue to hit the pavement and hopefully snag a summer offer.

 

Id fugiat odit eum ut quia quisquam eos. Labore dolorem velit non officiis dolore suscipit sunt. Ratione voluptatibus quidem pariatur. Et nostrum qui molestias laborum vero.

Et provident facilis quasi magnam cumque quis. Ut velit sapiente adipisci et doloremque fugit pariatur sint. Ea et nobis dolore autem.

Omnis ducimus quibusdam molestiae quasi. Voluptatem suscipit suscipit qui. Eius nobis esse exercitationem voluptas sequi quo. Placeat est neque illo quaerat veniam quod. Eligendi atque voluptatem minima officiis non cumque. Doloremque voluptas et voluptatem consequatur officiis inventore.

Consequatur voluptatem voluptatem perspiciatis qui culpa dolores iste libero. Quod omnis iste velit minus dolores facilis modi. Qui cupiditate accusantium doloribus at. Dolores saepe ut est ad voluptatem et quis. Eveniet dignissimos qui aut.

Career Advancement Opportunities

June 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.4%
  • Moelis & Company 01 98.8%
  • JPMorgan 01 98.2%
  • Guggenheim Partners 01 97.7%
  • Morgan Stanley 07 97.1%

Overall Employee Satisfaction

June 2026 Investment Banking

  • Moelis & Company No 99.4%
  • Morgan Stanley 02 98.8%
  • Evercore 01 98.2%
  • BMO Capital Markets 12 97.6%
  • Banco Santander 01 97.1%

Professional Growth Opportunities

June 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.4%
  • Moelis & Company 01 98.8%
  • Morgan Stanley 05 98.2%
  • JPMorgan No 97.7%
  • BMO Capital Markets 12 97.1%

Total Avg Compensation

June 2026 Investment Banking

  • Vice President (14) $434
  • Associates (43) $259
  • 3rd+ Year Analyst (8) $210
  • 2nd Year Analyst (22) $179
  • Intern/Summer Associate (13) $156
  • 1st Year Analyst (77) $151
  • Intern/Summer Analyst (71) $101
notes
16 IB Interviews Notes

“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”

Leaderboard

1
redever's picture
redever
99.2
2
BankonBanking's picture
BankonBanking
99.0
3
Secyh62's picture
Secyh62
99.0
4
kanon's picture
kanon
99.0
5
DrApeman's picture
DrApeman
98.9
6
dosk17's picture
dosk17
98.9
7
Betsy Massar's picture
Betsy Massar
98.9
8
GameTheory's picture
GameTheory
98.9
9
CompBanker's picture
CompBanker
98.9
10
Linda Abraham's picture
Linda Abraham
98.8
success
From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship

“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”