Resume Review - Investment Banking Analyst
Updated IB Resume, trying to obtain an analyst position in investment banking. Feel free to be harsh, let me know what you think. Thanks, in advance!
Edit: Touched it up, new form attached.
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which country are you in? Use the M&I template...
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Way too much empty space. Quantify and specify bullets from your internship: should go action-quantified result for every bullet. As a fellow athlete, I would ding your res for sounding like a twat in your Hockey section - you sound like you are saying that you are solely responsible for your team's improved outcome.
Updated the resume and attached the new PDF. If you guys (and, gals) could provide me with more feedback I would really appreciate it! Thanks, again for all of your help!
would use our experienced hire template we just released: http://www.wallstreetoasis.com/forums/wso-investment-banking-resume-tem…
could probably quantify the WSO experience even more...it's a bit vague, last bullet is best (since it quantifies actions/results), so maybe make it first.
Some super quick comments:
Wow, thanks a lot for the advice! It really is appreciated... @"WallStreetOasis.com" by the looks of the feedback and my complete lack of experience crafting a resume for IBD, I feel like the resume review service would be more beneficial to me than I thought. Do you think I have a decent enough amount of experience to have you guys put together a resume that would at least get some looks? Shoot me a PM if you have some time to discuss this. BTW, my grade point average was only a 3.12 which is why I left it off. Should I just include it, anyway? Thanks, again people!
My assumption is sub-3.0 if I don't see anything listed. Others may disagree.
Thanks, Duff. You are providing a lot of great insight with absolutely no obligation to do so. I really hope my hard work pays off and can do the same for others some day. In regards to the 3.12, I get rattled about it because I feel like (even with an NCAA sport) I won't even get a look. I'll definitely throw it on there, though if perception is worsened when it's absent. Thanks, again.
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