How does my Cold Email Sound?

I'm not sending this to any big banks just local small boutiques in my area. I am still a sophomore, so I am just trying to land something for this summer and use this to learning experience and for the networking. But Ill be honest I don't know much, so I know I wont be much help at the beginning, but I'm quick learner. Anyways please critique my email and don't hold back. If it sucks then let me know. Also do I attach my resume or nah? Thanks guys.

SUBJECT: University XXXX Student Seeking Career Advice

Dear Mr./Mrs. XXXX

My name is XXXX, and I’m a student at University XXX who found your contact information via XXXX.

I am seeking an investment banking internship this summer. I am fairly new and want to learn more about the industry. I was hoping that you might be willing to speak with me for a few minutes to discuss how I could best position myself to get an internship at your firm.

Thank you, and I look forward to connecting with you soon.
Best regards,
XXXX

 

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