Nitpick My Cold Emailing Template

Dear Mr./Ms. [First and Last Name],

Hi, my name is Monkre and I'm a sophomore at Non-Target, studying Economics and Finance. I’m interested in [ ... ]. 

I came across your contact information via [ … ], and I wanted to reach out to see if we could chat about [ … ].

I understand that you are very busy and I am more than happy to be flexible around your schedule. I’ve attached my resume for reference in case you would like to know more about me. Thank you for your time; I look forward to hearing from you. 

Best,

Monkre

1. Please just pick apart anything you see, no matter how small or petty.

2. When I don't know the marital status of a female contact, should I use "Ms." or just leave the honorific out entirely?

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