About to graduate would appreciate critique on Resume (applying to Commercial Real Estate Roles)

Hey, First post on the site. Applying to Commercial Real Estate firms. CBRE, JLL, Cushman&Wakefield, Colliers. Also applying to REIB, REPE and Real Estate Consulting Firms, however I don't figure I have much chance of success with the ladder. Would really appreciate any insight and a critique of my resume. I know that the format is messed up for the third work experience portion when I was altering the personal information. But anything you guys can help with I would be very much appreciative as well as any advice to where you guys think I should be focusing my job search on. Eventually I want to get into REPE or REIT type deal but I figured first starting out at a Brokerage is the best way to do so (and really the most realistic option). I figured trying to start in Investment Sales would be the best department but any advice otherwise is welcomed. I go to a "non-target" school I guess it's ranked very high for its accounting program and a lot of BB Banks and the Big 4 recruit from there, Real Estate is hilariously lacking in universities support, starting to change after we started RE Club but I am about to graduate. Anyway, any help/advice and critique would really help me out.

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