Bash my Resume (Junior)
This is my first resume. Tear it apart if you have to. I'm not looking to apply for a BB. I'm just trying to get internships to bulk up my work experience. I just want some feedback and see what you guys think.
I am not really qualified, but you are going to get burned on WSO and Finance in general for your stunt at the top of your Resume.
Good Luck.
LOL HR
Your resume needs to be more result oriented. Show that you're capable of making things happen. As it stands now, it seems like a job description. I would also wipe out the qualifications section - you don't need it. Frankly, it looks a bit silly. Aside from that, listen to Mb's advice. Good luck.
Either use Mergers and Inquisitions' format, Wharton's format, or your school's proprietary format.
And get rid of the Qualifications thing at the top. I don't even know what you're trying to do with that, dizzizzawg.
Add major GPA, if it's >3.5. The 3.2 may be a problem.
Your resume needs some work. Please contact me at [email protected] and I can help walk you through the process of effectively revising your resume and cover letter.
Sincerely,
Vince Des Roches
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