Critique My Resume - Keep in mind I am applying for SA positions

I would think about changing around your leadership and experience sections. Private Banking Specialist is the first thing I saw when I viewed the resume but you actually have several other more impressive experiences. Also, I would consider getting rid of some of the white space by adding relevant coursework and any skills you might have (computer,language, etc.). Good luck.

there's a $800,000 annual budget for your frat?

It's about $790,000, so I round to $800,000. 140-150 active brothers.

looks nice and clean. in my opinion (which is worth little though) it looks great.

Couple of things that I personally don't like: 1) Don't glorify what is essentially a bank teller, there's no need to call your self a personal banking specialist.

2) There's too much mention of fraternity, it makes you sound like a douche bag frat boy. Leave the stuff in leadership but there's no need to write captain of fraternity soccer team, just write captain of local soccer team.

Otherwise it looks OK.