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A lot of things still need updating here.
Just a few: -Put investment club first and really flush out the bullet points, try for 5\ -Try to cut down on the white space -Removed Investment Club from activities -Liven up your interests. Put something that will catch an interviewer's eye and spark conversation, not list more credentials. Makes you come across as some boring tech nerd (not necessarily a bad thing) when compared to the other student who writes "FX Trading, Golf, Scuba Diving, Photography" etc.
Remove the periods
led team, not lead team
to be honest, I would give this to an American friend to rephrase most of the text.
Bag room assistant? Really?
Terrible. One of the worst I've seen posted on here. You definitely need to find someone fluent to work with you on the bullet points...and there is way too much white space.
More Detail! It would seem you should have enough experience from those bullets to fill a page.
You have a period after "Macroeconomics" under relevant coursework, this should be a comma. What is (IP) and why is it after some courses?
Under Bag room assistant, move the fourth bullet up and combine it with the previous. There is no point in breaking out a new sub-bullet if there is only one. Just combine it with the previous sentence.
Don' say "pursuing major in Finance" say "BBA (or BS/BA depending on what you will receive) in Finance)"
Don't say you're teaching yourself HTML, list technical skills that you currently have.
You interests shouldn't be should be a list of activities you enjoy.
That's just a few things off the top of my head. Bring this to your schools career services...
Dude, you have to elaborate on your experience. Especially within the investment club. Talk about specific stocks you have researched or trading strategies you have generated. Also for the Bag Room job, I would consider rephrasing your title as: "Assistant Supervisor, Bag Room"
FYI -- rename the file. I saw your name.
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