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EDUCATION
*School name*
Master of Business Administration; concentration in finance Expected: 12/2021
Cumulative GPA: 3.67/ 4.0
Relevant Coursework: Corporate Finance / Management Accounting / Derivatives Markets / Managerial Economics / Strategic Management / Quantitative Analysis for Management

*School Name*
Bachelor of Talmudic Law Graduated: 07/2018

WORK & LEADERSHIP EXPERIENCE
*company name* Brooklyn, New York
Investment Analyst/Partner 04/2017 – Current
Perform due diligence on domestic buyers markets, check appraisal valuations and analyze portfolio performance.
Develop real estate investment thesis’ and negotiate below market value prices to achieve the best possible return on investment.
Research value add and TLC opportunities.

*School Name* Student Investment Fund Newark, New Jersey
Equity Analyst 04/2020 – Current
Performed valuation analyses, including DCF valuation, public trading comparison and precedent transaction comparison, with the Bloomberg Terminal.
Analyzed several pharmaceutical and technology stocks.
Reach out to industry experts for speaking gigs.

SKILLS, ACTIVITIES & INTERESTS
Languages: Fluent in English; Conversational Proficiency in Hebrew
Technical Skills: Microsoft Excel, Tableau, SPSS, Google Suite; Beginner in Python
Certifications & Training: Bloomberg Market Concepts
Activities: *School Name* Student Investment Fund
Interests: Financial markets, outdoor activities, spending time with family and reading books on existentialism

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I would place Work experience first.

Each sentence in one line only.

Under work experience, mention everything as an achievement (with specific figures)

Less is more.

Remove everything that it is not 100% necessary.

-- Alpha Seeker --
 

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Career Advancement Opportunities

September 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.5%
  • Moelis & Company 01 98.9%
  • JPMorgan 01 98.4%
  • Goldman Sachs 01 97.9%
  • Morgan Stanley 07 97.3%

Overall Employee Satisfaction

September 2026 Investment Banking

  • Moelis & Company No 99.5%
  • Morgan Stanley 03 98.9%
  • Evercore 01 98.4%
  • Banco Santander 02 97.9%
  • BMO Capital Markets 12 97.3%

Professional Growth Opportunities

September 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.5%
  • Moelis & Company 01 98.9%
  • Morgan Stanley 07 98.4%
  • Goldman Sachs 01 97.9%
  • JPMorgan No 97.3%

Total Avg Compensation

September 2026 Investment Banking

  • Vice President (16) $429
  • Associates (51) $260
  • 3rd+ Year Analyst (8) $210
  • 2nd Year Analyst (26) $182
  • Intern/Summer Associate (15) $159
  • 1st Year Analyst (84) $151
  • Intern/Summer Analyst (76) $101
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