Hey Guys Here are my 2 resume's I worked a bit in Audit with accounting and then finally got a break to work in trading. Unfortunately trading didn't cut it for me so now I am looking to get into valuation with in IB. I have always enjoyed financial analysis due to its complexity.I find the work very interesting and would like to build my career around it. Anyways please look my resume's and tell me which you guys like more and if possible provide some constructive criticism on the one you prefer. I really do appreciate all of the help. And will be cold emailing and calling banks in NYC, NJ, DC, and MD to get any opportunities at an internship to get my first break and prove my worth in the office. Thanks for all of the Help.
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| Resume_06-13-2013wso.doc 50 KB | 50 KB |
| Resume_07-15-2013wso.doc 51 KB | 51 KB |
-"Assessed market conditions within the equities market in order to assess and determine" doesn't sound right and bid/offer looks weird capitalized -Get rid of the periods -M&A Format would look cleaner -Your sentences seem pretty boring, throw in more action words and numbers
Would you prefer the first or second resume?
I like the second resume where you put your personal ventures. It looks more professional and makes you seem well-rounded, which I personally think is a good quality.
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