International Graduate student looking to get his resume destroyed

Hello everyone, Here is my resume, I am looking for a summer internship / analyst function for the summer of 2016, Preferrably in the US. As can be seen I have a lot of different experiences (and also quite some international ones), but I am very low on relevant experiences. The reason for this is that I only got into finance about a year ago. Also my GPA at my undergrad was not that good (~2.9/4). I hope I can make up for those things with my international experience. All advice welcome!

Thanks a bunch!

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Overall comment, this format seems very "basic", like you put it together yourself. Does your university have a template or format you can use? - "Followed courses for a total of 9 American Credits", "15 American Credits in additional subjects from the Faculty of Management Science" (low impact statement, no value, consider removing) - Your spacing between categories is weird. Large space after EDUCATION, but small space after WORK EXPERIENCE - Random bolding on lines (25/ a week+) and "Won the award for best participant" seem kind of random this to highlight - Fluent in Dutch, does that mean business command? Can you explain Revenue and EBITDA in Dutch?

 

Thanks for your reply. The format is based on the WSO layout and quite alike, should I look for a different font? Also I will take a look at he spacing. My Dutch is fluent (my native language). According to the converting system 15 american credits is half a year right? 13 of those credits are in Finance/Economics. Should I list those instead or just remove that line entirely?

 

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