Please critique: Seeking proprietary trader job (ex-poker pro)
So this is one where I know you could just dump all over me and say I have no chance. The fact of it is I have been to the school of hard knocks trading, many times, and have become a fairly advanced futures trader in the E-mini.
I'm at a point where I could spend 6 months developing a track record and seek employment that way - but as with trading you never know the outcome - I hold the belief that traders should think in terms of quarters/months not days... unless you are scalping based off market feel and order flow for 1-2 ticks at a time a win rate above 50% is pretty damn golden. (Obviously getting more than 1:1 on your money). So in that regard there are going to be period of losing in any successful system, and just assuming I am going to have an awesome track record after 6 months is foolish. Mostly I would like to build a career and have some sort of resume that looks a more attractive than the one I have now.
So here's the resume - All my uncertainty lies in the trading bullet point part... I did investigate the firm I am looking at joining and besides for quantifying the systems I've developed I decided on only two more bullet points.
Not sure about the webpage either... should that go under the trading category?
I feel if I can just get an interview I'll be fine.
PDF format - http://is.gd/E1got5
Thanks
(I've registered to take CFA level 1 in June 2013, but that doesn't really count for anything I suppose as most fail or don't show up.)
1) too much white space 2) put your PnL if you've been trading on your own account for 3 years and its decent (as you claim) 3) "extremely experienced" sounds ridiculous. 10+ years is extremely experienced. 3 years is barely experienced. 4)website is a pretty good touch, perhaps elaborate on that
Thanks I appreciate the feedback 2) PnL is terrible - I've blown two accounts since the beginning (terrible risk management - always trying to "be right") and tripled one that was a long term hold in silver that was not day trading and doesn't apply. For what I am trying to accomplish in intra-day trading the track record is not there, but from where I stand now I could create it but it would take 6-months to 1 year.
I feel like since I am coming from the retail world nobody expects me to have an awesome track record, otherwise I wouldn't be in the retail world. What I am offering the company is someone who is very experienced relative to the recent finance graduate and is probably a good bet in terms of generating revenue.
1,3,4 - great will do.
Your trading experience should have more bullet points than the other two
Take out "no tournaments or unusually large wins"... you don't want to sound like a loser. Instead try some like "modest competition placements, X money finishes"... Talk yourself up, not down.
"Take out "no tournaments or unusually large wins"... you don't want to sound like a loser. Instead try some like "modest competition placements, X money finishes"... Talk yourself up, not down."
Maybe I misunderstand what you are saying. Prize pools for tournaments are HEAVILY structured towards 1st, 2nd, and 3rd. The point of putting that in there was that I didn't play tournaments at all...i.e. I didn't hit any homeruns, or luckbox my way into success. I played with an edge over and over and over.
Quis laudantium modi ut qui harum molestias. Eligendi quam blanditiis ea illum quia nam perferendis sapiente. Consequatur pariatur aut necessitatibus recusandae vero nulla. Totam inventore velit voluptatibus et sed dolor. Debitis aspernatur labore delectus voluptatem. Aperiam voluptatem voluptatem praesentium quia. Et voluptate quisquam temporibus repellat quam dolor laborum recusandae.
Amet delectus asperiores nobis libero vero. Aperiam quia totam magni. Fuga qui sunt quisquam nulla nobis voluptatem. Quis possimus similique sit dicta ut tenetur autem.
See All Comments - 100% Free
WSO depends on everyone being able to pitch in when they know something. Unlock with your email and get bonus: 6 financial modeling lessons free ($199 value)
or Unlock with your social account...