Please Tear My Resume Apart 4-17-14
Looking to get into i-banking, summer plans are not on the resume.
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Looking to get into i-banking, summer plans are not on the resume.
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I'd remove articles, you have an "a" under the wealth management position. I'd also make tenses consistent. You wrote "analyze and compile" then you have "developed", etc. Make it all past tense instead of switching around. Also, i don't know what "technical" gpa means
Consistency and attention to detail is key. I would keep the WM experience with 4 bullet points because one thing should be emphasized apart from all else listed on your resume. Although I would get rid of 1 bullet point under your Fraternity along with adding 1 under the "Non-Target Welcome Week Leader" so that everything has 2 bullet points, being consistent. I would also abbreviate the months to get rid of some clutter, simplicity is sophisticated.
Just my opinion, take it with a grain of salt. Best of luck!
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