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Didn't you get plenty of replies on your last post??

Some things I noticed - just small mistakes Under Boutique Investment Bank *First bullet: you should make it something like "Worked on the short-listing, research & analysis, and due diligence of seven live deals...". With the way you have it currently, I thought the list stopped at analysis and got confused with another "and".

*Second bullet: the sentence is redundant/trivial. You're saying "Valued this to suggest valuation prices for deals"

Try something along the lines of: "Constructed discounted cash flows and analyzed multiples on comparable transactions to suggest valuation prices for deals". Less commas too

*Third bullet: I believe it's "a company" not "one company". I'm not an expert on grammar but I believe it's not correct to use "one" in place of "a" unless you're getting creative with your writing.

Everything else looks alright but to be honest, I don't understand some things you wrote under renewable energy company.

Hope this helps

TeamLRAM http://teamlram.wordpress.com

 

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