Didn't you get plenty of replies on your last post??
Some things I noticed - just small mistakes
Under Boutique Investment Bank
*First bullet: you should make it something like "Worked on the short-listing, research & analysis, and due diligence of seven live deals...". With the way you have it currently, I thought the list stopped at analysis and got confused with another "and".
*Second bullet: the sentence is redundant/trivial. You're saying "Valued this to suggest valuation prices for deals"
Try something along the lines of:
"Constructed discounted cash flows and analyzed multiples on comparable transactions to suggest valuation prices for deals". Less commas too
*Third bullet: I believe it's "a company" not "one company". I'm not an expert on grammar but I believe it's not correct to use "one" in place of "a" unless you're getting creative with your writing.
Everything else looks alright but to be honest, I don't understand some things you wrote under renewable energy company.
yeah not a lot of people would understand that, the renewable energy company thing. I can explain it if asked though. but do you think it undermines my credibility to write so much there when most people wouldn't understand?
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Wrong forum.
venture?*
Didn't you get plenty of replies on your last post??
Some things I noticed - just small mistakes Under Boutique Investment Bank *First bullet: you should make it something like "Worked on the short-listing, research & analysis, and due diligence of seven live deals...". With the way you have it currently, I thought the list stopped at analysis and got confused with another "and".
*Second bullet: the sentence is redundant/trivial. You're saying "Valued this to suggest valuation prices for deals"
Try something along the lines of: "Constructed discounted cash flows and analyzed multiples on comparable transactions to suggest valuation prices for deals". Less commas too
*Third bullet: I believe it's "a company" not "one company". I'm not an expert on grammar but I believe it's not correct to use "one" in place of "a" unless you're getting creative with your writing.
Everything else looks alright but to be honest, I don't understand some things you wrote under renewable energy company.
Hope this helps
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yeah not a lot of people would understand that, the renewable energy company thing. I can explain it if asked though. but do you think it undermines my credibility to write so much there when most people wouldn't understand?
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