Resume Critique - Looking to improve wherever possible
My goal is to land a position in management consulting. Please feel free to tear this apart - looking to improve wherever possible. Any suggestions are greatly appreciated!
Thank you for all your help.
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First of all, where the hell is your GPA? Get rid of Dean's List -- everyone makes it.
Props for at least using M&I so you don't get 20 dudes replying screaming, "M&I TEMPLATE YOU IDIOT" More measurable results. Second bullet point under Innovation Centre is way too damn long, I fell asleep halfway through the sentence. In general, you're very verbose. For example: "Responded to inquiries, processed and addressed client issues; ensured a high level of customer satisfaction to increase the conversion of one-time buyers to repeat purchasers" Could be easily shortened to: "Responded to client issues and inquiries; converted X% of one-time buyers to repeat consumers" - the high level of customer satisfaction is implied. X
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