Classic:
That resume isn't very good. I feel sorry for you if that's what you aspire to.

It's nice to criticize something but could you give some explanation about "isn't very good"??? A constructive criticism is far more better than just stating something without explanations.

Thx

 
bwggpb:
Classic:
That resume isn't very good. I feel sorry for you if that's what you aspire to.

It's nice to criticize something but could you give some explanation about "isn't very good"??? A constructive criticism is far more better than just stating something without explanations.

Thx

Well, the font sucks, the experience is shit, the GPA is horrible, the name is huge, its painful to read, you abbreviate months your shouldn't. It's just not very good. Try for a position as a bank teller.

 

Well thx for the comments. I've seen that you have a lot of experience in IB for a 20 year-old guy hahahah!!!

Well next time try to put your Resume so we can compare the formats. Btw I wasn't showing this Resume for the content if you had read what I wrote (detail attention is essential in IB...try to remember it).

 
bwggpb:
Well thx for the comments. I've seen that you have a lot of experience in IB for a 20 year-old guy hahahah!!!

Well next time try to put your Resume so we can compare the formats. Btw I wasn't showing this Resume for the content if you had read what I wrote (detail attention is essential in IB...try to remember it).

The proper phrase would be "attention to detail," champ. And if you possessed any you would have italicized ALL of Trilingual Bachelor's Degree in Business Administration, rather than just the first five words. Thanks for the advice though. Holla back, office.

 
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drexelalum11:
bwggpb:
Well thx for the comments. I've seen that you have a lot of experience in IB for a 20 year-old guy hahahah!!!

Well next time try to put your Resume so we can compare the formats. Btw I wasn't showing this Resume for the content if you had read what I wrote (detail attention is essential in IB...try to remember it).

The proper phrase would be "attention to detail," champ. And if you possessed any you would have italicized ALL of Trilingual Bachelor's Degree in Business Administration, rather than just the first five words. Thanks for the advice though. Holla back, office.

You are definitely right on Razume you can't see that I have italicized all of Trilingual....In fact they are many bogs on the format. Here is the link without bogs: http://www.razume.com/documents/11553

PS: I am not a native speaker so I may make some mistakes...

 

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