Rising Soph. @ Semi-Target, Looking for Critque

-Get rid of the "self-financing" and put the name of the scholarship and the amount. e.g. Ludwiq Scholar (55 percent of tuition). You can change the wording/format but self-financing just sounds strange.

-Get rid of the CPA pursuit. I don't mind it/care but a lot of people get annoyed when people put qualifications they haven't actually achieved on their resume. The reason is that I could put "CFA Level One Candidate" or "Pursuing CPA" on my resume right now but there's no way to actually measure how seriously I'm taking it.

• Get rid of anything from HS. You have a lot of great collegiate level experience so there's absolutely no need to keep HS stuff on there

-You'll need to be able to speak the language on Sabometrics and know your blackjack odds. Just be aware.

-Personally for your golf course job, I would put May 2012 - Dec. 2013

-This is personal, but I prefer to see every month cut at three letters, even june.

-Space feel cramped. I think it's because there is so much space between sections and so little between items in each section.

-Under frat I would put "Committee Co-Head" instead of "Active Member" for your descriptor