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I would like you guys help me tear apart my resume! Feel free to be as honest as possible. Note however that, since I am a WSO newbie, I cannot upload files or images. Therefore, please focus on content rather than format. And also, since there is nothing I can do about my editing experiences, please focus on grammar, relevance etc. rather than personal achievements.


Comments (5)

Aug 19, 2018

So.... where is this resume?

Aug 20, 2018

Hermione Granger
[email protected]
Adress, State, Country
Phone number

European target 1
City, Country
Bachelor of Science in Business and Economics - Finance and Management
Class of 2020
* Cumulative GPA: 4.45/5.0
* Relevant Coursework: Management and Operations, Strategy and Integrated Economics, Statistics, Corporate
Finance, Investment Management

European target 2
Exchange semester
* Specializations in Management and Finance

E-commerce firm X
Summer Accountant and Business Controller
City, Country
June 2018 - Aug 2018
* Applied accounting principles when working with accounts payable and accounts receivable
* Analyzed key financial numbers of the firm (EBITDA margins, sales, total inventory) and financial statements
* Performed sales forecasting and budgeting
* Contributed to minimization of the firm's distribution costs by reviewing their supply chain and supplier negotiation standards

Angel investment firm Y City, Country
Spring Intern
City, Country
March 2018 - Apr 2018
* Investigated new startups and their future prospects
* Used financial models in Excel and other digital tools to assess the future potential of new firms
* Sent out investment offers to and kept contact with numerous angel investors in order for them to provide my assigned startups with capital

MBB - Program name
City, Country
Participant in program
Apr 2018 - May 2018
* Selected as one of 30 students in Sweden to participate in a case competition with the purpose of finding a strategy that would help solve environmental issues in the Baltic Sea
* Kept contact with consultants at the firm, who continuously assisted my team and I when solving our case
* Presented a solution of the to a jury of consultants
* Enhanced my understanding of and interest in the consulting industry

European target - Society Z (Business Committee)
City, Country
Head of events
Sep 2017 - Apr 2018
* Contacted inspiring entrepreneurs to present their visions related to entrepreneurship in various lectures offered to students at the school Selected as one of 30 students in Sweden to participate in a case competition
* Successfully arranged numerous lectures including preparatory work such as catering and marketing assistance on social media

Language skills: Native in x, Fluent in English, Conversational Skills in y, Basic Skills in z
Computer: Proficient in Excel, Proficient in PowerPoint, Basic Knowledge in SPSS
Interests: Running, Reading, Travelling

Sep 14, 2018

I think you have really cool resume and you will get your dream job

Oct 27, 2018


Would it be possible for you to create a PDF?

It would make our lives easier..

Thank you!

-- Monkey 1

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