Please, need advice! Deadline tomorrow!!!

Hi,

I have had the pleasure oft reading WSO for quite some time, but this will be my first post.

I am currently enrolled at a German finance university' graduating end 2014.

With the following resume I am trying to break into an London / New York IB internship.

//Edit: this is the new redone version - 1 Page now!!!!

www.razume .com/documents/28984

Please tell me what you think

Thanks a lot

Chris

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Hi,

Thanks for your answer!

Could you please tell me what's wrong with the format- I don't see the problem.

Also, I am having trouble reaching the 1 page limit. In your eyes what info should I remove / condense?

Also I am in a German Uni. and we are not using the GPA system and deep ending on what method I use to convert it my GPA is between 3.0 and 3.2 . Is this terribly bad and should I thus leave it out?!

 

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