What do you think about this email template for alumni's.
"Hello Mr. Name,
I hope that this email finds you well. My name is [Full Name] and I am a sophomore a [Target University]. At school, I am involved in the Equity Society learning about DCF and fundamental analysis, which has led me to develop an interest in learning about Investment Banking careers on Wall Street. I am currently interning at an Asset Management fund in Philadelphia trying to expose myself to the industry and gain as much experience as I can during the summer. If you have any availability, I would love to have the chance to get on the phone with you and learn more about your experience working at [Firm Name]. I look forward to hearing from you.
Any tips would be helpful.