holy smokes critique the sh!t out of this....
GONE.
GONE.
+3,952 | Bank of America - Juniors Strike to start Monday May 6th | 415 | 1h | |
+839 | BOFA ALREADY TRYING TO COVER UP THEIR TRACKS | 79 | 18h | |
+578 | This is a dark day for Wall Street. | 46 | 7h | |
+401 | BofA Associate Death - WSJ, FT, CNBC, Bloomberg | 41 | 1h | |
+188 | How to strike without being fired. | 21 | 13h | |
+184 | Analyst at Bofa FIG-Thoughts | 28 | 19h | |
+169 | Big Layoff at Barclays - 5/1/24 | 88 | 1d | |
+161 | Hey WSJ, BBG, CNBC, FT, it's been more than 72 hours that this BofA IBD Associate was reported dead | 23 | 6h | |
+150 | BofA List | 37 | 5h | |
+127 | Shame on you, BofA. But also, the industry needs to change. | 17 | 16h |
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also, you misspelled "First" at the top of the page ... just kidding
thanks for the insight its appreciated. ill be sure to make those changes
I am not sure if you meant to type "Generated and income statements, balance sheets, and cash flows"
Also, from my experiences of being critiqued by others, I think you should remove the spanish blurb. If you are not fluent, then simply knowing some spanish is not really marketable for you.
"Fluent in English"? It's assumed, so you don't need that.
And there's probably another title that does justice to your role with the Rugby Team that doesn't make me think of George Washington crossing the Delaware River.
founding father lol- how aobut try co-founder & or team leader/ co-organizor/creator etc
haha @"OkComputer" its commonly used at my school but your right someone else reading it wouldn't know.
Overall, I would go through this a few more times with a much greater attention to detail. Really think about each bullet point, what you want to accomplish with it, and the clearest, most concise way to communicate your point. As it stands, many bankers would immediately dismiss this resume without even reading it if you caught them on a bad day.
Coming from a non-target and speaking from experience, your resume needs to be perfect. Non-targets can't have overlooked grammatical or formatting errors on their resume... the margin of error is just too thin.
Some specific items just at first glance:
-Don't use yahoo email. -"Gained exposer..." -"Analyzed gathered"; also "Recommended" is capitalized on the same line. -"Generated and income..." -I'd reword the first rugby bullet. "Overcame the difficulty" is awkward. -I'd remove the bullet on raising two hundred dollars.
-Remove bullet on the benefit of club to school community; that is an opinion, not a fact. -Remove "Fluent in English." On a side note, if you are ESL, I would note that. -Capitalized the first item in the various lists (intersets, technical skills, etc.)
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