Please Critique My Resume

I'm currently a sophomore at a community college (I got two years for free). I've been accepted and enrolled in a big public university for the next semester and participate in two finance clubs there. My GPA at CC is 3.1 with a major GPA of 3.75. Any criticism would help greatly. Resume

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I should get a 4.0 this semester at CC which would increase my GPA to 3.3. I will look into retaking some courses possibly, the main problem was my first semester I really didn't care and it ended up screwing my GPA. I'm planning on what you are saying with removing it from my resume after graduation. Hopefully if I can get an internship this summer, and become a leader in one of the finance groups, next semester I can remove my highschool and CC as well as some other stuff from my current resume. Is there anything you think I can do right now to make my resume more appealing? I've been able to network and have a reference for a WM internship, but I feel like my current resume will hold me back for this summer.

 

I could give you someone’s resume who works at Goldman if that would help at formatting , or mine if I take away some info from it

 

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