please help resume

http://www.razume.com/documents/20702

Final year student looking for internship position in an Asset Management company.

  • do I need to omit gpa?

please comment on my chances on getting in as well

thanks.

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This is one of the worst resumes I have ever seen.

1) Your GPA makes me sick. 2) As Pacman007 said, Indian is a nationality, and Chinese has many different versions (Mandarin, Wu, Cantonese) so clearly you're bullshitting there 3) There is too much plain space on those pages. 4) Hobbies?

 

Leave off the GPA, you're engineering they know it will be a little lower. Clarify WHICH dialects you speak...India has hundreds of local dialects. WAYYYY too much blank space, try and pick up some more experience.

Get busy living
 
UFOinsiderLeave off the GPA, you're engineering they know it will be a little lower. Clarify WHICH dialects you speak...India has hundreds of local dialects. WAYYYY too much blank space, try and pick up some more experience.

Needs one of your troll pictures.

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-btw, i did two part time job while in school (high school private tutor and bookstore cashier) to pay my accommodation, food fees... should I put both under "professional experience"?.. (the reason I omit those because adding too much unrelated [not related to FCF DCF etc...] info would hurt my chances) ..i though of just elaborate a little during interview would suffice.......please advise

  • yes, actually the "chinese" word in my resume is referring to 'standard chinese' (wiki), just like any chinese, be it people from singapore, thailand, vietnam, they are referring to the modern standard 'zhong wen'..but anyway, I would follow your advice.. thanks....[thus, in my resume, should be written as "standard chinese"+"Cantonese"+"Hokkien"+"Hakka", instead of just "chinese" ] :)

-the "indian" is my friend just add up while i'm taking shower. sorry for that. its suppose to be "german"....cz my roommate is ...

you guys are great.

 
johndeex123-btw, i did two part time job while in school (high school private tutor and bookstore cashier) to pay my accommodation, food fees... should I put both under "professional experience"?.. (the reason I omit those because adding too much unrelated [not related to FCF DCF etc...] info would hurt my chances) ..i though of just elaborate a little during interview would suffice.......please advise
  • yes, actually the "chinese" word in my resume is referring to 'standard chinese' (wiki), just like any chinese, be it people from singapore, thailand, vietnam, they are referring to the modern standard 'zhong wen'..but anyway, I would follow your advice.. thanks....[thus, in my resume, should be written as "standard chinese"+"Cantonese"+"Hokkien"+"Hakka", instead of just "chinese" ] :)

-the "indian" is my friend just add up while i'm taking shower. sorry for that. its suppose to be "german"....cz my roommate is ...

you guys are great.

This is bad. So bad.

 

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