please help resume

YourWorstEnemyI would attach a page out of a coloring book. Employers want to see that you can color inside the lines

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UFOinsiderLeave off the GPA, you're engineering they know it will be a little lower. Clarify WHICH dialects you speak...India has hundreds of local dialects. WAYYYY too much blank space, try and pick up some more experience.

Needs one of your troll pictures.

johndeex123-btw, i did two part time job while in school (high school private tutor and bookstore cashier) to pay my accommodation, food fees... should I put both under "professional experience"?.. (the reason I omit those because adding too much unrelated [not related to FCF DCF etc...] info would hurt my chances) ..i though of just elaborate a little during interview would suffice.......please advise

• yes, actually the "chinese" word in my resume is referring to 'standard chinese' (wiki), just like any chinese, be it people from singapore, thailand, vietnam, they are referring to the modern standard 'zhong wen'..but anyway, I would follow your advice.. thanks....[thus, in my resume, should be written as "standard chinese"+"Cantonese"+"Hokkien"+"Hakka", instead of just "chinese" ] :)

-the "indian" is my friend just add up while i'm taking shower. sorry for that. its suppose to be "german"....cz my roommate is ...

you guys are great.

This is bad. So bad.